2b. Analysis
of Issue: Structure
Structure is the most important
part of your essay. Your essay must be written in a standard
format with the standard logical transitions. The E-rater will
scan your essay to identify if it has a standard structure.
- Introduction/Conclusion- These elements will provide the structure
for your essay and keep you on track.
- Number of Paragraphs. To satisfy the E-rater, your essay
should be 4 to 5 paragraphs: an introduction, a conclusion, and
three "body" paragraphs. Each paragraph should have
2 to 5 sentences (total essay about 300-400 words).
Note: You should skip a line between paragraphs since the
TAB key does not function in the essay section.
Essay Template
The template is just a guideline.
You do not have to adhere to it. Often you will have to make
changes to suit your argument.
- The numbers of sentences indicated
for each paragraph is a guideline that varies depending on how
much content you have.
- The transitional phrases we
use in the Template are intentionally simplistic. This is not
a simple approach where you can "fill-in-the-blanks."
Flesh out the template somewhat and use it as a guideline to
write a disciplined and focused essay.
Template
1) Introductory
Paragraph (2-4 sentences)
Make sure to keep your introductory
paragraph concise, strong and effective.
What the introductory paragraph
should accomplish:
- Explain the issue (briefly).
- Show that you understand the
full complexities of the issue (for example, by recognizing competing
interests or various factors).
- State your position on the issue
(without the details yet).
Sample template for introductory
paragraph (2 sentences):
a) Whether ________________________
depends on _____________________.
b) (insert your opinion),
__________________________.
2) First Body Paragraph (3-5 sentences)
Begin to develop your position
with your most important reason. Use one or two examples to back
up your main point:
a) The chief reason for my
view is ___________________________________.
b) For example, ____________________________________.
c) Moreover, ______________________________.
d) Finally, ________________________.
3) Second Body Paragraph
Expand your position with a "secondary"
reason. Support your rationale further with at least one example.
- State your second reason (one
only).
- Provide rationale and/or evidence
to support it.
Here's a sample template for the second body paragraph that accomplishes
these objectives:
a) Another reason for my view
is_____________________________.
b) Specifically,________________.
c) The result is,__________________.
4) Optional Third Body Paragraph
In this paragraph (optional)
you acknowledge a competing viewpoint or counter-argument (and
rationale and/or examples that support it), and then provide
rebuttals to further support your position. In this paragraph
you walk a tightrope, you must acknowledge the counter-argument,
but yet deny it immediately in the next sentence and use that
denial to strengthen your own argument.
- Acknowledge a different viewpoint
or a counter-argument.
- Provide rationale and/or examples
that support it.
- Provide a rebuttal.
Here's a sample template for
the third body paragraph that accomplishes the objectives indicated
above:
a) Some might argue,_____________________________.
b) Yet,____________________
c) Others might cite, __________________.
d) However,_____________________.
5) Conclusion Paragraph
In this paragraph you write a
summary of your position in 1 to 3 sentences:
- State the thrust of your position.
- Restate the main points from
the body of your essay.
The concluding paragraph is not
the place for new information or reasons. It is not a place to
draw new conclusions.
a) In sum, I concur that ________________________.
b) However,_________________; on the whole______________.
>>continue to Analysis
of Issue: Timing (page 4 of 4 of chapter 2)