3a. Dissect
Arguments
ASSUMPTION HUNT: On Analysis
of Issue questions you try to answer grand issues such as "Should
China be in the WTO", or "Should parents have vouchers
to send children to the school of their choice". The questions
are different than Analysis of Argument, where you look for badly
flawed reasoning. The difference between Analysis of Issue and
Analysis of Argument is that reasonable people could differ on
Analysis of Issue, but no reasonable person would absolutely
support something in an Analysis of Argument question. When you
are doing Analysis of Argument questions, look for reasoning
fallacies.
The Stimulus
In the
first part of the Analysis of Argument topic, the writer tries
to persuade you of their conclusion by referring to evidence.
When you read the "arguments" in these questions, be
on the lookout for assumptions and poor logical reasoning used
to make a conclusion.
The Question Stem
Question
stems will ask you to decide how convincing you find the argument.
You will be asked to explain why an argument is not convincing,
and discuss what might improve the argument. For this task, you'll
need to: first, analyze the argument itself and evaluate its
use of evidence; second, explain how a different approach or
more information would make the argument itself better (or possibly
worse).
A question stem might look like
this:
In many countries, including
the USA, the postal service is a quasi-governmental organization
whose primary mission is to deliver mail to individuals within
the borders of the country. Since, it is argued, mail delivery
to rural addresses where the population is sparse cannot be done
economically under any acceptable circumstance; the postal service
is given a monopoly on mail delivery. Actually, however, mail
delivery could be done economically by private corporations as
long as each corporation were given a monopoly to service any
given area where sparsely populated areas were balanced against
densely populated areas.
How would you address this
argument?
1) Explain how logically persuasive you find this argument...
analyze the argument's line of reasoning and use of evidence.
Translation: You should critique
the argument. Discuss whether you think it's convincing or not
and explain why.
2) Explain what, if anything,
would make the argument more valid and convincing or help you
to better evaluate its conclusion.
Translation: Spot weak links
in the argument and offer changes that would strengthen them.
Attack the Argument
Each
argument's stimulus has been intentionally "loaded"
with flaws (fallacies) that you should acknowledge and discuss.
If you fail to see the more fundamental problems in the argument,
you will not get a high score.
The
purpose of the essay is for you to critique the reasoning in
the argument (the stimulus will tell you to make this evaluation).
Your personal opinions are not relevant. Your essay needs to
focus on flaws in the argument. While in the Analysis of Issue
you write your opinion on a subject, in the Analysis of Argument
you write a logical critique of a flawed argument. Thus, the
approaches to the two essays should be different.
Evaluate the Argument
Pick out flaws in the argument
by identifying its weaknesses:
- What is the argument's conclusion?
- What is the basis of the author's
conclusion?
- Do you find the argument persuasive?
What makes it persuasive or not persuasive?
- What could be done to strengthen
the argument?
- What assumptions does the argument
rely upon? (there should be several)
SAMPLE ARGUMENT
For example, the GRE test may
present a statement such as the following for the analysis of
an issue:
In many countries, including
the USA, the postal service is a quasi-governmental organization
whose primary mission is to deliver mail to individuals within
the borders of the country. Since, it is argued, mail delivery
to rural addresses where the population is sparse cannot be done
economically under any acceptable circumstance; the postal service
is given a monopoly on mail delivery. Actually, however, mail
delivery could be done economically by private corporations as
long as each corporation were given a monopoly to service any
given area where sparsely populated areas were balanced against
densely populated areas.
How would you address this
argument?
In the above argument for analysis,
the proposition is contained in the last sentence of the stimulus
and so the analysis of the argument must focus on this sentence.
They are trying to argue for the privatization of the postal
system.
I. The proposition regarding
the privatization of the post office is based on two questionable
assumptions and is most likely not true:
A. Population in the USA is distributed
in such a way that postal market areas can be divided and costly
market areas can be balanced against lucrative market areas.
B. Private corporations are more cost effective than quasi-governmental
organizations.
II. Postal markets cannot be
distributed so that service to any given market is economical:
A. reason for the distribution
of population
B. effect of that distribution on geographically contiguous areas
C. effect of that distribution on geographically non-contiguous
areas
III. Private corporations are
not necessarily more cost efficient than quasi-governmental corporations.
A. case of defense contractors
B. case of private corporations
IV. The case for the privatization
of the post office department is based on questionable assumptions.
The idea that the post office department
can be privatized is based on two questionable assumptions: In
the first place, it can be shown that population in the USA is
not distributed so that postal market areas can be divided with
the result that costly market areas are balanced against lucrative
market areas. In the second place, it can be shown that private
corporations are not necessarily more cost effective than quasi-governmental
organizations. It is, therefore, most likely that privatization
of the post office department cannot be accomplished.
In
the first place, due to mechanization, one worker on the farm
can support at least three hundred people living in the city.
Large combines with relatively small crews can roll across the
prairies harvesting 500 ton of wheat in a day, enough to feed
hundreds of people for a year. As a result, there has been less
and less employment in rural areas and, as a further result,
people have left the rural areas for life in the city, creating
the contemporary dilemma for postal planners. It is easy to distribute
tons of mail to big city dwellers in high rise buildings at a
reasonable cost. But who is going to find a cost effective way
to deliver a single first class letter twenty miles down a country
road in a snowstorm in January? Therefore, postal markets cannot
be distributed so that service to any given market is economical
using contiguous geographical markets.
Perhaps
the answer lies in distributing the cost of mail delivery by
balancing a cost intensive market area such as rural up-state
New York with a lucrative market area such as New York City.
On examination, however, this turns out to be an impossibility
because population simply is not distributed in neatly balanced
areas for reasons noted in the preceding paragraph. Albany, New
York, probably has a greater population than the entire state
of Wyoming. Is a single company going to be given Wyoming and
Albany as a single market area? If so, that company will not
be able to service the area economically because the costs of
doing business over such a long distance are extremely high.
The current post office department, in effect, already does this
and it has found it to be not economical. Clearly, it is also
true that postal markets cannot be distributed using noncontiguous
geographical markets, so that service to any given market is
economical.
Furthermore,
not all private corporations are economical. The federal government
has always subsidized defense contractors rewarding them for
their inefficiencies with huge cost over-runs. Besides this,
any number of large private corporations have gone bankrupt including
Continental Airlines and Pan American Airways. Would any social
planners want postal delivery discontinued to any area because
a large, privatized postal company declared bankruptcy?
The
argument that the post office department can be privatized is
based on two questionable assumptions. It is therefore most likely
that this argument is invalid (1) because populations are not
distributed in such a way that large, regional post offices could
be run economically, and (2) because private corporations are
not necessarily cost efficient and economical.
Notice that this essay states two assumptions and then
spends three paragraphs elaborating on the two main assumptions.
The overall structure is tight (perhaps a few sentences could
have been edited and paragraphs 2 and 3 condensed into one paragraph).
Either way, this is a 5 or 6 essay.
One element here is that problems with the stimulus is strictly
assumptions: about the economics of running a post office and
the assumption of private sector superiority over public sector.
In most of the essays there are glaring logical flaws. We identify
these common errors in the next chapter.
>>continue to Analysis
of Argument: Finding Errors (page 3 of 5 of chapter 3)